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Thread: Busted!
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21st February 2016, 11:11 AM #1
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21st February 2016, 11:15 AM #2
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Re: Busted!
Nicely composed and converted.
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21st February 2016, 02:37 PM #3
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Nice one, Rob. He doesn't look to pleased with being photographed. IMO the strip of brick at the right edge of the frame is distracting. I'd either crop to eliminate it completely. You have plenty of room at bottom to crop a bit from bottom and right to retain the same aspect ratio.
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21st February 2016, 02:41 PM #4
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Re: Busted!
Rob,
Excellent bit of PJ that tells the story really well.
I agree with Dan that the margin of brick down the right hand side should be cropped.
Robert
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21st February 2016, 05:27 PM #5Moderator
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Re: Busted!
Another good one Rob,
I think he's more miffed about the questioning than being photographed.
I do agree with the cropping suggested by Dan and Robert on this one.
Cheers, Dave
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22nd February 2016, 03:27 PM #6
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Re: Busted!
What about that bright spot at the left hand side? I seriously think you wouldn't lose anything much of the scene if you get rid of that too...
Just my opinion, I feel that brick on the right hand side should stay. With the face of that guy who was busted, it stopped the process, don't you think? I may be wording this statement wrong. What I mean to say is, he was caught, perhaps many times, but the physicality of the brick there means in my mind, the end of his wrong-doing? Help...
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