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    I liked the perspective, diagonals, lines, and of course the cyclists.

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    Re: Cyclists

    Wonderful conversion and use of leading lines that point to the cyclists. Consider cropping at the top to eliminate the automobiles, as they are distracting, especially in the context of your thread title.

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    Totally agree with Mike - great image that just needs a little tidying at the top. Check your white and black points after cropping, losing the car may need a change to the white point in particular.

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    Thanks Mike and Simon. I've cropped as you both suggested. I also increased white point just a tad as Simon mentioned.
    I personally do not find the cars distracting, but I acknowledge the point made by Mike about them being a distraction due to the title.

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    Re: Cyclists

    Nicely captured.

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    Re: Cyclists

    Love this shot idea...did you do this on the side of a blind or something? Very nice and balanced although you have lost that steps at the top. Can't you have just eliminated that white car instead?

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    Re: Cyclists

    I really do like the revised version better. Well done!

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    Re: Cyclists

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely captured.
    Thanks, John.


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    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    Love this shot idea...did you do this on the side of a blind or something? Very nice and balanced although you have lost that steps at the top. Can't you have just eliminated that white car instead?
    This was taken from the second floor of the convention center. My wife and I had just climbed the stairs to the second floor and I decided to take a look out the window (front of the building). I saw the scene below me unfolding, so I quickly adjusted the focus ring to hyperfocal distance and took two quick snaps. I liked the second shot better.

    Quite honestly, Izzie, I didn't think of trying to clone out the cars.
    Thank you for your comment and suggestion. It's something to investigate.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    I really do like the revised version better. Well done!
    Thanks, Mike.


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    Re: Cyclists

    Cropped version looks better, very nice shot

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    Sergio,
    I agree that the cropped version is excellent!
    An interesting and unusual point of view with lovely leading lines from the left taking one's eyes right to the cyclists.
    My only suggestion would be to clone out the lamp post up in the right hand corner of the picture.
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    Re: Cyclists

    Well seen and capture, Sergio.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Cropped version looks better, very nice shot
    Thanks, Binnur.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RBSinTo View Post
    Sergio,
    I agree that the cropped version is excellent!
    An interesting and unusual point of view with lovely leading lines from the left taking one's eyes right to the cyclists.
    My only suggestion would be to clone out the lamp post up in the right hand corner of the picture.
    Robert
    Thanks, Robert. I've replaced the cropped version with an updated cloned version. Hopefully it looks OK.
    Thanks for the comment and suggestion.

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    Re: Cyclists

    Quote Originally Posted by DEAN01 View Post
    Well seen and capture, Sergio.
    Thank you, Dean.

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