2016 Project 52, Second Quarter by Joe/ Joebranko

[Geoff F]

I did wonder about the main subject being too central, Joe, but for me the shape of that bit of beach sufficiently throws everything off center. If you removed the beach area, then I think you would need to think about the symmetry being too strong.

[joebranko]

I did wonder about the main subject being too central, Joe, but for me the shape of that bit of beach sufficiently throws everything off center. If you removed the beach area, then I think you would need to think about the symmetry being too strong.

Thanks Geoff

[joebranko]

Another Sunrise: Different Day, Same Lake, Different Rocks'.

ISO 800, 37mm, f 8, 1/500"

[Urbanflyer]

Beautiful sky and interesting rocks with the bird adding that little extra. The composition might be stronger if you got rid of the rock on the farthest right edge in post processing. Not everyone is willing to make such a change. But try it and see how it changes the feel of the image. Also suggest pulling down the sky a smidge to eliminate the open expanse of sky above the clouds. (Since you stated composition was you focus for the year I am commenting on only that aspect. ) The diagonal line formed by the rocks (minus the far right, makes an interesting juxtaposition with the diagonal of the clouds.

[joebranko]

Beautiful sky and interesting rocks with the bird adding that little extra. The composition might be stronger if you got rid of the rock on the farthest right edge in post processing. Not everyone is willing to make such a change. But try it and see how it changes the feel of the image. Also suggest pulling down the sky a smidge to eliminate the open expanse of sky above the clouds. (Since you stated composition was you focus for the year I am commenting on only that aspect. ) The diagonal line formed by the rocks (minus the far right, makes an interesting juxtaposition with the diagonal of the clouds.

Thanks Judith! Some very interesting observations. I will try them later today when I am on my computer. Thank you!

[Geoff F]

Probably roughly equal arguments for and against the right side rock. I agree about a little crop from the top and, I suppose, a balancing amount from the left side. That would have the effect of moving the horizon a little further upwards from centre which I think will make a better composition.

[joebranko]

Probably roughly equal arguments for and against the right side rock. I agree about a little crop from the top and, I suppose, a balancing amount from the left side. That would have the effect of moving the horizon a little further upwards from centre which I think will make a better composition.

I will look at that also.

[joebranko]

I have incorporated suggestions from both Judith and Geoff into my Sunrise shot; here is the final pic:-

[Geoff F]

The edit looks good to me, Joe.

[bnnrcn]

Great sunset Joe, I like the edit

[joebranko]

Great sunset Joe, I like the edit

Thanks Binnur

[joebranko]

The edit looks good to me, Joe.

Thanks Geoff

[joebranko]

Early morning shot at the Lake Ontario beach. Taken with my (new) 24mm lens.

[Wavelength]

Beautiful,really.......

[IzzieK]

What a pleasant scene. I love it...

[Geoff F]

Looks fine, Joe. Worth viewing with the lightbox option where the fine detail becomes more obvious.

[joebranko]

Beautiful,really.......

Thank you!

[joebranko]

What a pleasant scene. I love it...

Thanks Izzie !

[Urbanflyer]

Nice job! Great eye and good composition! Thanks for sharing!

[joebranko]

Nice job! Great eye and good composition! Thanks for sharing!

Thank you so much Judith. That means a lot to me.