On the beach - Street Category - C&C are most welcome !!

[Tejal]

Please share your C&C for my below image.

Regards,

IMG_3921 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[bnnrcn]

Hi Tejal IMO those two guys in the FG are spoiling the composition a bit by making a crowd and dominating the scene. It would be better to have two relaxed dogs in the FG with the people in the BG but I think it is too late for that

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal IMO those two guys in the FG are spoiling the composition a bit by making a crowd and dominating the scene. It would be better to have two relaxed dogs in the FG with the people in the BG but I think it is too late for that

Thanks Binnur for your feedback. I have some more of the same place. Here is one more :

IMG_3924 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Manfred M]

Tejal - neither of these two images works particularly well for me. In the first image, there is too much at the edge of the frame. The rightmost man is simply to close to the edge of the frame and he is pulling out eyes out of the image. The image would be stronger without him there. The man walking into the frame on the left is also a bit too close to the edge.

In the second image, the dog camera right is also too close to the edge; it's nose almost touches the frame/. The two people walking along are a nice touch, but they are too far away to have a positive impact on the image.

You should look at cleaning up the sensor dust on your shots. They are really noticeable with the plain sky in this image.

The cloudless sky is not great either. I'm a firm believer in using negative space in an image, but I feel that that much sky is not contributing to the image (image 2). Clouds would have been nice...

[bnnrcn]

Hi again Tejal The second image is less crowded but the dog on the RHS pulling my eyes out of the frame and my eyes keep going from one dog to another.

[Geoff F]

I was about to give some feedback but I see Manfred has already written exactly what I was thinking.

[Shadowman]

Yes, the pups are the subject for me, the angle of the shot is great.

[Tejal]

Tejal - neither of these two images works particularly well for me. In the first image, there is too much at the edge of the frame. The rightmost man is simply to close to the edge of the frame and he is pulling out eyes out of the image. The image would be stronger without him there. The man walking into the frame on the left is also a bit too close to the edge.

In the second image, the dog camera right is also too close to the edge; it's nose almost touches the frame/. The two people walking along are a nice touch, but they are too far away to have a positive impact on the image.

You should look at cleaning up the sensor dust on your shots. They are really noticeable with the plain sky in this image.

The cloudless sky is not great either. I'm a firm believer in using negative space in an image, but I feel that that much sky is not contributing to the image (image 2). Clouds would have been nice...

Thanks for your feedback. I will try to capture something good next time .

[Tejal]

Hi again Tejal The second image is less crowded but the dog on the RHS pulling my eyes out of the frame and my eyes keep going from one dog to another.

Thanks Binnur for your feedback .

[Tejal]

I was about to give some feedback but I see Manfred has already written exactly what I was thinking.

Thanks for your comment.

[Tejal]

Yes, the pups are the subject for me, the angle of the shot is great.

Thanks John. I think i will be better next time .

[Manfred M]

Thanks for your feedback. I will try to capture something good next time .

Tejal - you (and the rest of us) always try to capture something good. In situations like the one you were shooting in, a loot of things have to come together to get a good shot. As you are relying on the random acts / motions of your subjects, these shots often don't work you. I have a very larger reject pile that people never see because this happens all the time, especially in street photography.

[Tejal]

Tejal - you (and the rest of us) always try to capture something good. In situations like the one you were shooting in, a loot of things have to come together to get a good shot. As you are relying on the random acts / motions of your subjects, these shots often don't work you. I have a very larger reject pile that people never see because this happens all the time, especially in street photography.

Agree with you Manfred. But IMO sometimes, such feedback helps a lot. When you go next time, what to do and what not to, a little idea about that also, can help to get a better shot.