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    Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

    Please provide your views and suggestion with composition, frame, crops.

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    PS : Please click on the image for lightbox screen view (Highly recommended)

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Love the shot! Two things to think about: 1) try cropping a little from the top and commensurately from the left. 2) Try straightening a little using the base of the faint rock on the left as a benchmark.

    Such a great atmosphere you have captured! Thanks for sharing!

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Nicely done.

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    O, this kind of image can absorb the viewer into it

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Nice shot Raj. This is certainly not what I would have expected in an image of Goa (but then, I haven't been there, so my opinions are based on what I have seen in tourist literature, rather than things that would attract photographers).

    The image is almost mysterious looking (which I like) and I also like that you haven't lost 100% of the texture in the water,as the viewer does need some small break between sea and sky). I like negative space in an image too (and it works here), but I personally might be tempted to trim some off the top and some off the right side to give the image a bit more balance.

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Urbanflyer View Post
    Love the shot! Two things to think about: 1) try cropping a little from the top and commensurately from the left. 2) Try straightening a little using the base of the faint rock on the left as a benchmark.

    Such a great atmosphere you have captured! Thanks for sharing!

    Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely done.
    Thanks a lot for your kind review and appreciation

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Wavelength View Post
    O, this kind of image can absorb the viewer into it
    Thanks a lot for your valuable review and kind words

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    Nice shot Raj. This is certainly not what I would have expected in an image of Goa (but then, I haven't been there, so my opinions are based on what I have seen in tourist literature, rather than things that would attract photographers).

    The image is almost mysterious looking (which I like) and I also like that you haven't lost 100% of the texture in the water,as the viewer does need some small break between sea and sky). I like negative space in an image too (and it works here), but I personally might be tempted to trim some off the top and some off the right side to give the image a bit more balance.
    Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion sir Yes, it was a very hectic trip for goa and i just had one chance to shoot rocks and sea as fine art i must admit it was my very first seascape and experimented a lot in those few minutes time.

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    Re: Rocky Goa #1 High Key. C&C Welcome

    of course I meant commensurately from the right, not the left--ambidextrous thinking!!

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