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Originally Posted by
GrumpyDiver
Brian - looks fine to me (with the usual caveats).
I'm fairly sure that we have had this discussion before. You like "moody" lighting in your images and you are essentially trying to fake that with PP. Therein lies the problem - when you try to fake it, you end up with an underexposed image that really doesn't look right. Underexposed is underexposed and looks it.
There is a technique that does work, but it only works under certain limited circumstances, none of which apply to these types of shots because of the space constraints your are working under. The technique tends to be reserved for portraits, but, there is no reason that it can't work for other imagery.
These shots are done later in the day, when the sun is setting and the background is getting darker. Fill light is used to illuminate the subject(s), and the inverse square law ensures that the light drops off quickly, so things in the background are dark. There is a "cheat" that is used in this kind of photography. A neutral density filter is fit over the lens to darken the whole image and enough light is pumped in via flash (high powered studio lights, not a Speedlight) to expose the subject correctly.
You've almost got that setup in this shot (if the railings(?) were not in the shot.