An evening walk in Dardanelles

[ahmetmacitsahin]

[Shadowman]

Nice looking scene, I would crop out the dark bit of land at left.

[bnnrcn]

Hi Ahmet Nice mixture of street photography and landscape photography . If your software has a cloning function, I think cloning the boats and the dark piece of land that John has already mentioned would improve the image. Also, your horizon needs a little levelling.

[IzzieK]

Good scenery Ahmet...I echo John and Binnur's comments.

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Hi John, Thank you for your comment. I cropped out the dark bit of the land at left. What do you think of it?

[mknittle]

Yes much better Ahmet. The boats didn't bother me but the land was distracting.

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Hi Binnur, Thank you for your nice words. I have PlayMemories Home as softwareand and it doesn't have cloning function. I cropped out the dark land on the left but I couldn't do anything about the boats. What do you mean with HORIZON LEVELLING?

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Thank you very much Izzie.

[mknittle]

The horizon isn't off by much I wouldn't bother.

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Thank you

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Thank you Mark

[Shadowman]

Hi John, Thank you for your comment. I cropped out the dark bit of the land at left. What do you think of it?

Ahmet,

Much better.

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Thank you John

[bnnrcn]

Where the mountains meet the water is not completely parallel to the bottom frame Ahmet. Most softwares has a straightening function to level the horizon. The horizon looks tilted just a little bit in the image and it is not a big matter really. But correcting it might be a good practice for you. My first images in CinC weren't levelled either. So, I learnt here that I should correct it

BTW (by the way) the crop looks better.

PS. You can also crop the image from the top a bit to get close to the same aspect ratio as the original. May be from the half of the upper post.The sky is not very interesting there and you wouldn't lose anything by cropping it.

Hi Binnur, Thank you for your nice words. I have PlayMemories Home as softwareand and it doesn't have cloning function. I cropped out the dark land on the left but I couldn't do anything about the boats. What do you mean with HORIZON LEVELLING?

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Hi Binnur,
Thank you for the feedback.

[mknittle]

Where the mountains meet the water is not completely parallel to the bottom frame Ahmet. Most softwares has a straightening function to level the horizon. The horizon looks tilted just a little bit in the image and it is not a big matter really. But correcting it might be a good practice for you. My first images in CinC weren't levelled either. So, I learnt here that I should correct it

BTW (by the way) the crop looks better.

PS. You can also crop the image from the top a bit to get close to the same aspect ratio as the original. May be from the half of the upper post.The sky is not very interesting there and you wouldn't lose anything by cropping it.

When I open the Image in lytebox and run the waters edge up to the top of the frame it looks very close to level looking at the sides.
I think there is a cove or something where the hills meet making it look like its not level?

[bnnrcn]

Hi Mark The tilt is very minor , something like +0,1 or +0,2. Actually not a very important point but because Ahmet is new he doesn't know that he has to check and correct the horizon, that's why I commented on it. May be there is also a very minor lens distortion and you are seeing this.

When I open the Image in lytebox and run the waters edge up to the top of the frame it looks very close to level looking at the sides.
I think there is a cove or something where the hills meet making it look like its not level?

[bnnrcn]

Hi Ahmet. I guess your software has gridlines to help to correct the horizon because it is difficult to do such a thing with using your eyes only .Please find and use that function if you haven't already done so,to make things easier for yourself .

Hi Binnur,
Thank you for the feedback.

[NorthernFocus]

Nicely composed and timed, Ahmet.

[ahmetmacitsahin]

Hi Binnur, it doesn't have gridlines in my software (or I couldn't find it). I hope l will start using playone. I have heard that Sony is providing it free for the Sony users. Maybe then I will deal with it.