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1st May 2016, 08:25 PM
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Où sont les neiges d'antan
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1st May 2016, 09:16 PM
#2
Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
Nice shot, I'm sure most viewers will see something different as the subject.
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1st May 2016, 09:26 PM
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Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
I had to google the title - my French poetry knowledge is sadly lacking!
As John mentions, it's a strong scene but lacks a subject to focus on. I'd suggest (if you can reshoot) walking down the hill a little way and use that tree at the bottom of the image as a subject, placed in your scene in the gap between the valley. You'll need a fairly wide angle and a low shooting angle.
The other suggestion I'd make is that it could do with some delicate post processing as it's very flat. This is partly the lighting, but I can see how you could get creative with that mist, the greens and the shadows.
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1st May 2016, 09:26 PM
#4
Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
It's global warming, I tell you!
Or the Purple Haze could be in honor of Prince.
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1st May 2016, 09:59 PM
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Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
Are there lakes in the top right hand? I am not sure that they add to the scene.
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2nd May 2016, 05:29 AM
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Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
No Ken, those are some specks of melting snow from the last winter ( neiges d'antan) ;-))
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2nd May 2016, 05:58 PM
#7
Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
A nice scene I would crop the image from the top just a little bit to eliminate the bright melting snow .
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2nd May 2016, 08:22 PM
#8
Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
I like this as it is. We are too much used to highly processed images with exaggerated colours. The bits of snow at the top give relevance to the title.
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3rd May 2016, 01:26 AM
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Re: Où sont les neiges d'antan
n'enquerez de sepmaine
Ou elles sont, ne de cest an,
Qu'a ce reffrain ne vous remaine:.....
mais, ils retourneront...l'opposé des femmes...
nice and clean but looks a bit oversharpened - because of the mist?
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