A fleeting moment

[Melanie90]

[ionian]

Great catch, it's a lovely look.

The eye on the right is in shadow and I recommend working on this area. I'd also be tempted to crop a little more off the right hand side, but this is totally subjective.

[Melanie90]

Great catch, it's a lovely look.

The eye on the right is in shadow and I recommend working on this area. I'd also be tempted to crop a little more off the right hand side, but this is totally subjective.

You're absolutely right!

[Shadowman]

Nice look, can't tell whether you caught her in a happy moment or your gesture made her day.

[Rebel]

Great shot Melanie, I like the PP to

[Mutley]

Great composition and timing Melanie

[bnnrcn]

Very nice one Melania

[Melanie90]

Hey Shadowman! I guess I caught her in a happy moment as I took this picture at an outdoor concert on the Labour Day ��

[James G]

Hi Melania, this is a nicely captured 'moment'. I really like the action and movement portrayed through the swing of her arm.

I agree that it might make a stronger image to crop in, but I'm also slightly intrigued at how dark the shadowed eye is.

I'm wondering if it is down in part to the B&W conversion rather than simple luminosity.

[rpcrowe]

I love this image because of the vitality it shows. If it were mine, I would consider cropping out the bright vehicle at image left...

[Melanie90]

I love this image because of the vitality it shows. If it were mine, I would consider cropping out the bright vehicle at image left...

Hi, I tried this option but I didn't like it. Anyway, thanks for your suggestion.