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15th May 2016, 05:44 PM
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Abstract - wood blocks
We went for a walk along the Thames earlier. One of the features of the new development east of Greenhithe is a staircase with reclaimed sea defences as a barrier. I thought it made for an interesting study in texture and form. C&C welcome.
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15th May 2016, 05:57 PM
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Re: Abstract - wood blocks
An excellent work of low depth of field
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15th May 2016, 06:38 PM
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Re: Abstract - wood blocks
I really like it! I wonder how it would look if the metal frame around the post were in focus as well. Is there any interesting texture to the steel rings?
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15th May 2016, 08:38 PM
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Re: Abstract - wood blocks
I was trying to be a contortionist to capture this - I agree that the front metal ring would be better if it was in focus but it's only a little soft, and I wanted to ensure the blocks at the back were bokehlicious. I've brought out the red colour in post - they weren't as weathered as you might expect. I've yet to get a feel for accurate work with shallow DoF on the m43 set-up.
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15th May 2016, 08:42 PM
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Re: Abstract - wood blocks
Lovely shot. I am in admiration of your range of subjects. Macro, medium, or telephoto. You're always finding a new way to shoot. A great eye for story.
This particular shot I think could benefit from a little deeper depth of field. Contrast between the metal rings and the wood makes me happy. I might even swing the camera up a few degrees to look more down. The fact that you can see a horizon here detracts from the feeling. You could crop it sure, but re-taking the photo looking a few degrees more down allows you to bring more of the main subject into focus too. And of course have to keep those far posts in the shot.
Once again, love your work!
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16th May 2016, 01:28 AM
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Re: Abstract - wood blocks
I was just curious. It is a beautiful image just the way it is!
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17th May 2016, 06:55 AM
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Re: Abstract - wood blocks
I cannot see any image at this time (I saw this last night offline) so I will be back later. This is the second post where no image appeared.
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