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    Just a bridge

    The curved lines of the bridge and its stairs are a nice object to play with, together with the landscape under it.
    I hope I succeeded.

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    re: Just a bridge

    Nice series.

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    re: Just a bridge

    Not sure about the near handrails being out of focus in the first two work for me, but I really like the last one - the zig-zagging of the bridge, reflections in the water and the colour in the graffiti all work great together!

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    re: Just a bridge

    I do like the lines, George. They are complex images but the lines do lead the eye around the composition to different points of interest. The human element is an added plus.

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    re: Just a bridge

    +1 to Sergio's comment. I was able to understand what I was looking at in#1 because of image #2. I thought the guy was having a hard time bringing that bicycle up the stairs and looking at #3 image, it seems like another level of stairs where he was at #2. I kinda like the story within the story here with the culmination of the set in #3 where the graffiti is well seen there...Very nice sequence if I may say so...

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    re: Just a bridge

    Of the first two, I prefer the composition of the second. The last one has the most potential for interest for me. The lines tend to lead towards the graffiti - the bright and lively part contrasting with an otherwise rather dull and grim scene. For that reason, I would want to lift generally the tones under the bridge and increase the saturation of the graffiti colours.

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    Re: Just a bridge

    The first one doesn't work for me, George. A nice idea but that prominent out of focus top to the handrail ruins what could otherwise have been a good composition.

    The second one isn't quite so obvious but this is still a problem. The other one looks good.

    Which is much the same as Matt has already mentioned.

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    Re: Just a bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    The first one doesn't work for me, George. A nice idea but that prominent out of focus top to the handrail ruins what could otherwise have been a good composition.

    The second one isn't quite so obvious but this is still a problem. The other one looks good.

    Which is much the same as Matt has already mentioned.
    That first picture was made with a Sigma 105 2.8 lens, which I was trying out. Picasa doesn't give the exif anymore for a while. The other 2 were made with the Nikon 28-70 2.8. All of them standard on f8. Camera Nikon D700.

    I checked the dof calculator for the first one. Another diafragm wouldn't help much.

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    Re: Just a bridge

    I suspect, George, your only hope with that rail in #1 would be to either shoot from further away or do a merge of 2 focus points, which would probably mean a hand edited mask to overcome subject movement.

    Maybe cropping to 4 x 5 ratio or square and losing the rail plus everything to the right might be an alternative but quite a bit of impact may also be lost.

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