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    Prayer

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    Re: Prayer

    I am wondering if you could have shown the other icon too in full instead of a crop. His expression looks good too.

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    Re: Prayer

    Lew,

    I like how you caught this person in an obvious gesture of prayer. There is a nice line created between her gaze and the statue. The scene depicts a sense of reverence and supplication.

    For some reason, and I'm not sure why, the figure on the right does draw my attention a bit. It does not, however, detract from the overall feel of the image.

    Sergio

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    Re: Prayer

    I would apply a bit more processing and emphasize which subject is most important to you or who you want the viewer to concentrate on. The composition has a few good elements however none are fully explored to engage me, I can't speak for other viewers but I am immediately attracted to the highlights, nothing else really holds my attention. Nice effort.

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    Re: Prayer

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    I would apply a bit more processing and emphasize which subject is most important to you or who you want the viewer to concentrate on. The composition has a few good elements however none are fully explored to engage me, I can't speak for other viewers but I am immediately attracted to the highlights, nothing else really holds my attention. Nice effort.
    What kind of processing?

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