Helpful Posts: I know at some point during the beach wedding festivities, this little girl's mother sternly told her - "Now, DON'T You Go and Get That Dress Wet." Being a kid and being so sure you can still play and not get wet, off she went.
I've given them different treatments just to see which ones get the most attention. I find sometimes it's best to just leave the forest and let the trees sort themselves out rather than keep staring at the same image until my eyes cross.
The Long Look
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Keeping Out a Wary Eye
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Oh! No! Don't!
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Thread: Testing the Waters
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13th July 2016, 10:11 PM #1
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Testing the Waters
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13th July 2016, 11:40 PM #2
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Re: Testing the Waters
Nice captures, she was tempting fate.
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14th July 2016, 12:17 AM #3
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Lovely!
#6, for me, is the real winner--good action, expression, exposure, detail! Hurrah!
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14th July 2016, 02:34 AM #4
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I love them all - what a cute girl... Might be a cute girl with a very angry mom!
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14th July 2016, 07:52 AM #5
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I kinda like the colouring effect you did in #2 and #7-- that colour suits her very much because of the sidelighting on her RHS defines her shape. Please do number your images for quick referencing instead of counting them from the beginning again and again...just a thought...
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14th July 2016, 10:52 AM #6
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An enjoyable and well captured set of special moments.
Sergio
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14th July 2016, 07:08 PM #7
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I prefer the colour versions although the B&W might be improved with the careful use of a little more highlight brightness.
#2 and #7 are my choices.
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14th July 2016, 07:16 PM #8
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I edited these before I got into using luminosity masking techniques. It is a great observation as I was thinking along those same lines after I posted this series. The mother of the young lady wants all three but she too cannot decide if she likes the color or B&W's best.
Originally Posted by Geoff F
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14th July 2016, 08:52 PM #9
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Great set Chris
Compositionally the last image is my fav but it is difficult to chose 'a best' among the last three images
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16th July 2016, 06:13 PM #10
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Nicely caught.
IMO, these are a bit tilted and undexposed.
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16th July 2016, 07:32 PM #11
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I cropped to the horizon line so I know they are straight. The beach does slope upward, from bottom left to mid point right. Originally Posted by thetraveler
They are about a 1/3 to a 1/2 stop under and I may yet adjust accordingly. I will likely be making some digital negatives from these for Platinum/Palladium prints - more so Ziatypes if you are familiar. Then, I will have to open closer to the 1/2 stop out and toss in a bit more contrast. Thanks for the observation.
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16th July 2016, 07:44 PM #12
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Very nice set Chris.
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19th July 2016, 12:26 AM #13
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Nice moments, Chris. Given the simple background and colours I don't think the b&w treatment adds anything to the images.
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