Originally Posted by
GrumpyDiver
Richard - I spotted that as well and if you look at people, about 95% (according to some portrait photographer I asked) fall into that category.
Arnold - further to this issue, I think you will find photographing your model from the other side (smaller eye closer to the camera) and the dominant eye away from it will generally result in a stronger image.
The other issue I have with this image is the significant amount of "negative space" on the right hand side of the image. This is not working all that well for me. While I do use negative space, too much is just as bad as too little.