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    Silver tunnel

    Silver tunnel

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    Re: Silver tunnel

    Nicely captured.

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    Re: Silver tunnel

    Hi Simon IMO the band of concrete at the top is distracting and needs cropping. I would also lift the shadows on the ground a bit.

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    Re: Silver tunnel

    Losing the heavy masonry at the top and having a different image size ratio would concentrate more on the light at the end of the tunnel.

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    Re: Silver tunnel

    Hi Simon

    Lovely hi-contrast black and white. Simple but strong composition. I really like the way the walls in the tunnel is lit, and how it directs the viewer. Great job

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    Re: Silver tunnel

    Simon, I like it as it stands. Geoff's suggests concentrating on the light at the end of the tunnel would also work I think. I do believe you have two separate pictures here.
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: Silver tunnel

    I too feel cropping away just above arch would make the tunnel intensely focused

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