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31st July 2016, 08:30 PM
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31st July 2016, 08:49 PM
#2
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31st July 2016, 08:59 PM
#3
Re: Silver tunnel
Hi Simon IMO the band of concrete at the top is distracting and needs cropping. I would also lift the shadows on the ground a bit.
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31st July 2016, 11:10 PM
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Re: Silver tunnel
Losing the heavy masonry at the top and having a different image size ratio would concentrate more on the light at the end of the tunnel.
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1st August 2016, 05:38 AM
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Re: Silver tunnel
Hi Simon
Lovely hi-contrast black and white. Simple but strong composition. I really like the way the walls in the tunnel is lit, and how it directs the viewer. Great job
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1st August 2016, 10:22 AM
#6
Re: Silver tunnel
Simon, I like it as it stands. Geoff's suggests concentrating on the light at the end of the tunnel would also work I think. I do believe you have two separate pictures here.
Cheers Ole
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1st August 2016, 12:26 PM
#7
Re: Silver tunnel
I too feel cropping away just above arch would make the tunnel intensely focused
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