You have a good eye for seeing the scene but between the eye and the final product there has to be some kind of action taking place to work with the tonal and contrast range to show the viewer what your eye actually saw or, that you want them to see.
What I, the viewer am seeing is a nice pastoral scene that is nice but rather ho-hum. As a viewer, I want more.
In this instance, and I do not know what program you are using for your post production, all that is needed is a slight contrast boost (I did it in Photoshop, using a Curves Adjustment pulling the bottom quadrant down just a tush) and with a HSB Adjustment where I knocked the intensity of the yellows down a bit as they were over-heightened by the contrast shift. I am sure there is a program out there that will mimic PS or LR like GIMP or PhotoPaint if these tools are not in your lineup.