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13th August 2016, 05:31 PM
#1
Sunset, again
Looking in the stored files captured in the last months, I've edited the following two, I'm looking for your advices & criticisms.
Thanks.
Nicola
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13th August 2016, 06:00 PM
#2
Re: Sunset, again
I like both, I'd play around a bit more with that crashing wave; try to get it separated a bit from the background. You have enough elements within both compositions but need to guide the viewers gaze throughout; don't want to let a single element distract and control the others. Nice efforts on the captures and edits.
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14th August 2016, 03:12 AM
#3
Re: Sunset, again
Beautiful colors and great mood
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14th August 2016, 12:19 PM
#4
Re: Sunset, again
What a spectacular sunset. Lovely images. If I could make one suggestion on the second image. You have a beautiful leading line with the railing leading your eye into the sunset but the right of the image showing the lovely checkerboard tiling feels cut off and I think if you had turned 15-20 degrees more to the right it would have made this shot even better.
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15th August 2016, 07:20 PM
#5
Re: Sunset, again
Beautiful light and colors
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15th August 2016, 08:51 PM
#6
Re: Sunset, again
The second is spectacular, I would like to see a B/W conversion as the tones are there & the colour of the sun detracts a wee bit from the lovely leading line and checkerboard a wee bit to me.
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