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    The trail through the forest

    C&C welcome.

    The trail through the forest

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    Re: The trail through the forest

    Nicely done!

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    Re: The trail through the forest

    Nicely composed.

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    Re: The trail through the forest

    Sorry Ashish but this one does not work for me. My eyes follow the tracks to the forest but haze and a hanging branch block the view into the forest. I am left wondering what I should be looking at.

    Andre

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    Re: The trail through the forest

    It might look better in B&W Ashish

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    Re: The trail through the forest

    For some of us the mystery of what we should be looking at translates into the mystery of what we will find if we continue on. Images are so personal and viewing another's images means we bring to it our own personal bent. Not everyone will like any particular image.

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    Re: The trail through the forest

    Quote Originally Posted by Round Tuit View Post
    Sorry Ashish but this one does not work for me. My eyes follow the tracks to the forest but haze and a hanging branch block the view into the forest. I am left wondering what I should be looking at.

    Andre
    I'm getting similar thoughts about this scene, Ashish.

    There is quite a bit of out of focus foreground which is giving me a bit of distraction, then my view is grabbed by the left side sharply focused foliage and any idea of following the track has been lost.

    So just a few thoughts. Crop quite a bit from the left side so as to concentrate on the track. Maybe go square or lose a bit of foreground and try 5 x 4 ratio?

    This seems to get my attention into following that track into the far distance.

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    Re: The trail through the forest

    I think this scene needs a subject, Ashish... Perhaps someone walking along the track.

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