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22nd August 2016, 04:14 PM
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22nd August 2016, 09:26 PM
#2
Re: Waiting for something
Hi Melania - nice capture. If it were mine, I'd crop a lot of the right side away as your subject gets lost a little bit. Maybe crop to the closed umbrella? It also needs a slight rotation I think, but my eyes can deceive me! I'd also check your white point as I think you are lacking highlight tones at present.
Apart from these technical points, I really like the moment and the scene.
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22nd August 2016, 10:04 PM
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Re: Waiting for something
Hi Melania,
I also thought I'd crop some off the right hand side, although not as much as Simon suggests.
Personally, I'd crop just the tangly bit off from the nearest umbrella, leaving some of the building on right and the receding lines of the street scene.
All the best, Dave
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22nd August 2016, 10:42 PM
#4
Re: Waiting for something
Nicely seen and captured.
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22nd August 2016, 10:58 PM
#5
Re: Waiting for something
The verticals in the background buildings seem vertical enough to me. I agree with Simon that the image needs more contrast.
I suggest the guy is waiting for one of those pokemon critters to turn up.
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23rd August 2016, 03:20 PM
#6
Re: Waiting for something
Hi guys, thank you for your comments!
What do you think about this?
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23rd August 2016, 06:06 PM
#7
Re: Waiting for something
The crop works for me, nice image
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