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    This one must be mine.

    Another from our local railway station. Just trying for something a little out of the ordinary as far as the PP is concerned and to focus more attention on the young lady in the process. The train is blurred in the original but I thought that a little more separation wouldn't do any harm.

    Fuji X - 18.5mm fixed lens.
    This one must be mine.

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    Re: This one must be mine.

    John you accomplished what you set out to do IMO. Each time I look at this image my eye is quickly drawn back to the lady. I like this image a lot.

    Dave

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    Re: This one must be mine.

    I love this shot and the processing. The composition is great too.

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    Re: This one must be mine.

    I think you captured a great moment, John. I wonder if you considered cleaning up the extra hands and legs on the right side? They are a bit confusing. The feet under the seat don't appear to belong to the knees sticking out.

    I don't mind the filter on the train but I think I would have removed it entirely from the woman as I feel it makes her blend in with the background rather than standing out from it.

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    Re: This one must be mine.

    Nicely done.

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    Re: This one must be mine.

    John, you captured moment, good timing.

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    Re: This one must be mine.

    Very nice image John If possible it might be better to clone those extra hands and legs as Greg already mentioned.

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    Re: This one must be mine.

    Thanks all for the comments.

    Greg, Binnur, sheer idleness. Didn't think anyone would notice the protruding knee and hand but I should have known better.

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