Loch lomond sundown

[Benjy]

Taken tonight,any critique would be most helpful....

[Donald]

First thing though, Bernard - What do you think about it?

If someone showed that to you and said, "Could you give me your critique on this?", what would you tell them?

[Benjy]

Donald,Get rid of those two poles,tad too dark methinks

[Donald]

Donald,Get rid of those two poles,

Agreed.

[Wavelength]

I too feel the same; probably those climbers on the left bottom corner too; removing them would enhance the vastness of the water body and a tad of brightness to distinguish the layers of those mountains

[Geoff F]

It's a matter of personal choice but I would also clone out the aircraft track.

[mugge]

Lovely scene. Get rid of the two poles and the aircraft track. Easily done, great photo. That is only my opinion.
Cheers Ole

[FootLoose]

Nice scene, Benjy, and you have already identified the two major problems.

[arith]

Airplane at 50,000ft, could be carefully cloned out; what if it was 5:4 ratio and the tree disappeared. I'm not good at critique so mostly avoid it.

You are very lucky to photograph such a nice place and it is a really nice photograph.

[Benjy]

Thanks all for comments, much appreciated.....