Two Frames

[Ollokot]

Hi Folks,
Thoughts and Comments more than welcome, exposed on 35mm Black and White Film.

[ccphoto]

I am hoping there is not supposed to be a relationship between the two images, because if there is, I've missed it completely.

I think I need more information as to the type of film and processing chemistry before I can make a proper comment. Also, the first image has a major problem: The steering wheel is on the wrong side. :-) (it's an American joke.)

[DanK]

The first doesn't do anything for me, but I like the lines and textures in the second. I'd consider upping the contrast and structure/clarity

[joebranko]

I like the second shot a lot! Well taken!

[Shadowman]

Nicely framed.

[Cogito]

The first doesn't do anything for me, but I like the lines and textures in the second. I'd consider upping the contrast and structure/clarity

Pat, I agree with all of Dan's comments.......

[Ollokot]

Thank you all for your thoughts and comments.
Pat.

[madcrow]

I have never shot film, it is right or wrong no second chance. I think you did very well.

[Wavelength]

Very nicely done

[IzzieK]

Excellent shot in #2, Pat!