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Thread: Waiting for the passengers
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29th October 2016, 01:21 PM #1
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Waiting for the passengers
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29th October 2016, 04:17 PM #2
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Nice capture of the colors.
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29th October 2016, 06:00 PM #3
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Ashish,
I like the concept, but feel that either cropping the shot to eliminate some of the dock on the left, and taking a slice off the bottom, would put a bit more emphasis on the boat's pilot while still leaving the strong, bright colours of the chairs in the composition.
Robert
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29th October 2016, 06:47 PM #4
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
I was also wondering about either cropping in a fraction or alternatively pulling back a little, if that was possible.
If cropping, I would be tempted to leave the left side as it is now and lose just a small bit from the right side plus a balancing amount from top and bottom.
Good focus and exposure from what must have been problematic lighting.
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29th October 2016, 10:24 PM #5
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Nicely seen, Ashish. I like it. But I agree with others that a slight crop would improve it. I'd crop the left side just enough to cut out the large piling. Well done.
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30th October 2016, 04:30 PM #6
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Here is a cropped version...
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30th October 2016, 05:20 PM #7
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Mobetta
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31st October 2016, 12:06 AM #8
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Definitely looks better without the power lines on the left.
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31st October 2016, 12:08 AM #9
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Like your crop!
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31st October 2016, 08:17 AM #10
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
Better, Ashish.
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4th November 2016, 09:09 AM #11
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Re: Waiting for the passengers
+1 for the crop, nice image.
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