The composition and concept remind me of some photos I like a lot made in the first half of the 20th century, and that's a compliment. Unfortunately, I can't remember the photographer.
Consider cropping at the bottom to eliminate the foreground pier.
+1 to Mike's comment, especially regarding the pier. It isn't adding anything to the composition.
I would remove the whole metal portion below, making it landscape like and also would name it "Confusion"
So what do the waitresses wear? Nice effort.
I just now remembered the photographer, Todd Webb, and the image he captured in 1946 I was thinking of. Click this.
Yes i like it more this way
Ole, next time I go back for a visit to Melbourne, let's go for a photowalk...you find some interesting stuffs to photograph...
John (Shadowman) the waitresses were given a bra and told to "fill 'er up" You know...like Hooters. Sorry, I can't help that comment...