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    Birthday celebration

    Birthday celebration

    What's your opinion? Good taste? Good shot?

    Please let me know.

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    Michael

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeC91 View Post
    Birthday celebration

    What's your opinion? Good taste? Good shot?

    Please let me know.

    Regards

    Michael
    I would level the picture so that the middle vertical line of the window is vertical. But maybe there's no room for it.

    Just curious, where is this shot taken? Breakfast?

    George

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Good shot, but I'd like to see the verticals, vertical.

    Where is that? It looks like Dijon outside

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Nicely captured.

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Quote Originally Posted by george013 View Post
    I would level the picture so that the middle vertical line of the window is vertical. But maybe there's no room for it.

    Just curious, where is this shot taken? Breakfast?

    George
    George,
    Having the slight tilt to the shot adds a touch of spontaneity and gaiety to the scene, and leveling it to make the central window mullion vertical might also result in cropping out elements of the story such as the birthday-candled pancakes.
    Robert

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Thank you for your comment. I will correct as you suggest. It was taken in Milan there is a covered gallery - shops at the bottom. This was taken in a first floor cafe.

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Birthday celebration

    revised pic attached
    Last edited by Dave Humphries; 6th November 2016 at 10:10 PM.

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeC91 View Post
    Birthday celebration

    revised pic attached
    Well done... More emphasis on the couple and the kiss!

    Many years ago I had a beard and my girl friend (at the time) used to grab the beard when we kissed. I ended up shaving

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    The revised version looks better...

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    Re: Birthday celebration

    Nice image.

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