Perhaps on the other side of the gate, that red and white barrier kills the shot; at least for me..
I have to agree with John.
Hi George,
The second shot works far, far better with the stated aim of the sunk/sinking boat being the subject, but I'd have titled the thread "Off kilter"
In the first, that boat is just part of an out of focus background - but the first shot is more 'postcard' (although I must agree with John and Greg).
Cheers, Dave