At the Tibetian market - C&C are welcome !!

[Tejal]

Herewith I am sharing one photo : Street - with Self portrait. Kindly share C&C for the same.

Regards,

Tejal

My crop

IMG_1774- Small by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

Original frame

IMG_1774- R by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

Interesting shot, very nice self portrait. Definitely makes me ask what's she doing, the odd yet natural placement of her lower hand is a bit unsettling, however the mind sort of fills in what's missing. Did you crop to remove the bike from the reflection? I think the full image works better.

[Dave Humphries]

I agree with John, the second is a preferable composition.

I don't find the scooter too distracting, although it might be worth toning down the red and orange plastic a tad.

The brightness of the canvas on the right hand side does attract my eyes rather too much, but cropping may spoil the composition and toning it down wouldn't look right either, because it's obviously outside and should be brightly lit.

Taking another look, I think a small crop to RHS does improve it.

HTH, Dave

[madcrow]

Nice shot, 2 for me.

[bnnrcn]

I find the original better Tejal

[Geoff F]

The wider scene for me.

The crop seems too tight. I know you can't see any more of her head in the wider version but at least you are aware of the reason.

Maybe slightly tone down the highlights on the blue area at the top and the cloth on the right.

Otherwise, this looks OK for me.

[Shadowman]

Tejal,

I've been meaning to comment on your wonderful images with the 18-55mm, comment has nothing to do with the quality of the lens but on your close proximity to your subjects and the fact that all of your images seem to captured with only one lens. I wish I could see you in action as it would help me in my street photography excursions, as your son is sometimes with you on your adventures perhaps you should give him a video camera to capture you doing your thing? A point and shoot with video capability would suffice.

[mknittle]

Tejal,

I've been meaning to comment on your wonderful images with the 18-55mm, comment has nothing to do with the quality of the lens but on your close proximity to your subjects and the fact that all of your images seem to captured with only one lens. I wish I could see you in action as it would help me in my street photography excursions, as your son is sometimes with you on your adventures perhaps you should give him a video camera to capture you doing your thing? A point and shoot with video capability would suffice.

Now that is quite a complement.

[Tejal]

Interesting shot, very nice self portrait. Definitely makes me ask what's she doing, the odd yet natural placement of her lower hand is a bit unsettling, however the mind sort of fills in what's missing. Did you crop to remove the bike from the reflection? I think the full image works better.

Thanks John for your comment. They were opening the stall. She was removing the front plastic cover. That bike, i tried to avoid but i failed. Field didnt support me. My crop was not because of that actually. I thought of not to show that I incorporated me in the frame through the mirror.... something like that ....

[Tejal]

I agree with John, the second is a preferable composition.

I don't find the scooter too distracting, although it might be worth toning down the red and orange plastic a tad.

The brightness of the canvas on the right hand side does attract my eyes rather too much, but cropping may spoil the composition and toning it down wouldn't look right either, because it's obviously outside and should be brightly lit.

Taking another look, I think a small crop to RHS does improve it.

HTH, Dave

Thanks Dave for your feedback. I actually tired to tone it down and have reduce little saturation also. If I tried to reduce it more then it was looking odd. But i think little crop as you suggested may help. I will try it.

[Tejal]

Nice shot, 2 for me.

Thank you for your feedback.

[Tejal]

I find the original better Tejal

Thank you

[Tejal]

The wider scene for me.

The crop seems too tight. I know you can't see any more of her head in the wider version but at least you are aware of the reason.

Maybe slightly tone down the highlights on the blue area at the top and the cloth on the right.

Otherwise, this looks OK for me.

Thanks for sharing your view .

[Tejal]

Tejal,

I've been meaning to comment on your wonderful images with the 18-55mm, comment has nothing to do with the quality of the lens but on your close proximity to your subjects and the fact that all of your images seem to captured with only one lens. I wish I could see you in action as it would help me in my street photography excursions, as your son is sometimes with you on your adventures perhaps you should give him a video camera to capture you doing your thing? A point and shoot with video capability would suffice.

he he he...

Thank you so much for your kind words. You made my day.

There is no technique i use to shoot on street . I am planning to buy 10-18 mm lens (but dont know when i will be able to buy ). I hope with this i will be able to go more close. I prefer to take a corner (so that i dont disturb people there) and keep myself comfortable and wait for the desired moment. This is the only technique i use on street.

And I wish that I could get an opportunity to do photography sometimes with you.

Here are some pics where i was caught in action

14976432_1301599373223665_6238812131562936322_o by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

14908216_1301599579890311_8336360819276706444_n by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

11149366_933382440045362_7114686098926951554_n by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

1039658_1025041510900361_9054703278305513970_o by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

10482449_983629825020623_7229781596259330984_o by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

11707469_983629641687308_2290653239009047876_n by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Tejal]

Now that is quite a complement.

he he he...

He never criticizes .

[Shadowman]

Tejal,

Very nice shots of you with the birds. And very good examples of you in action, exactly what I was looking for, you do seem to look for the best angles as shown by how you composed your peacock silhouette. I don't think I could get down that low; just laziness on my part.

[Tejal]

Tejal,

Very nice shots of you with the birds. And very good examples of you in action, exactly what I was looking for, you do seem to look for the best angles as shown by how you composed your peacock silhouette. I don't think I could get down that low; just laziness on my part.

He he he... nothing like that. Your desire for good frame will force you to do that. So often I sit down on the ground without feeling shy. :P.

[mknittle]

I checked out your Facebook page. You do some very nice work that we haven't seen on CIC. My favorite is the "It's all in the hands" winner.

[Tejal]

I checked out your Facebook page. You do some very nice work that we haven't seen on CIC. My favorite is the "It's all in the hands" winner.

Oh thank you so much for visiting my profile. Brick kiln series I have posted on cic in color n b&w both.

[mknittle]

Oh thank you so much for visiting my profile. Brick kiln series I have posted on cic in color n b&w both.

I must have missed some of the black and white ones I also had a look at your Flicker page. very nice. be careful of Flicker they lost all the images I had there about 30.