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    Off their feet.

    Shot this at a hurling match while back.
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    Thanks, Maurice.

    Off their feet.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Nicely done.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Very nice action shot. Too bad neither of the subjects' eyes were wide open. Consider cropping significantly on the right side, as the information in that area of the image isn't helpful to the viewer. I can imagine equally successful arguments to eliminate the person on the left edge of the frame or to leave him as is. The argument to leave him in the image would be more persuasive for me if you have a composition that includes all rather than part of him.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    +1 to Mike's suggestion on the crop. I also wonder about both the saturation and midpoint setting on the exposure. The grass and skin tones look a bit off to me and the scene looks rather bright, given the cloud cover).

    Off their feet.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely done.
    John, thanks.
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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    Very nice action shot. Too bad neither of the subjects' eyes were wide open. Consider cropping significantly on the right side, as the information in that area of the image isn't helpful to the viewer. I can imagine equally successful arguments to eliminate the person on the left edge of the frame or to leave him as is. The argument to leave him in the image would be more persuasive for me if you have a composition that includes all rather than part of him.
    Mike, thanks for your comments. I would like to say your wrong but your not. Advice much appreciated.
    Maurice.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    +1 to Mike's suggestion on the crop. I also wonder about both the saturation and midpoint setting on the exposure. The grass and skin tones look a bit off to me and the scene looks rather bright, given the cloud cover).

    Off their feet.
    +1 for Manfred's crop. Advice very much appreciated.
    Thanks, Maurice.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Great action shot, Maurice. Focus is where it should be. Very well done.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Sergio M. View Post
    Great action shot, Maurice. Focus is where it should be. Very well done.

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    Sergio, thanks.
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    Re: Off their feet.

    Great separation on this action shot and as already covered cropping and simple PP will enhance the image even more.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Stagecoach View Post
    Great separation on this action shot and as already covered cropping and simple PP will enhance the image even more.
    Grahame, thanks.
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    Re: Off their feet.

    I like it Maurice, nicely done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rebel View Post
    I like it Maurice, nicely done.
    Matt, thanks.
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    Re: Off their feet.

    Nice one Maurice. Great action shot.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    A nice action shot Maurice.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ndukes View Post
    Nice one Maurice. Great action shot.
    Neville, thanks.
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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by Craigie View Post
    A nice action shot Maurice.
    Gary, thanks.
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    Re: Off their feet.

    That's well caught Maurice. Action isn't that easy when it comes to achieving a satisfying comp. Have to go with the PP suggested by M 'N M though.

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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by John 2 View Post
    That's well caught Maurice. Action isn't that easy when it comes to achieving a satisfying comp. Have to go with the PP suggested by M 'N M though.
    John, thanks.
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    Re: Off their feet.

    Quote Originally Posted by madcrow View Post
    +1 for Manfred's crop. Advice very much appreciated.
    Thanks, Maurice.
    +1 from me .. the cropping makes this photo "pop"

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