Framed!

[ashish]

C&C welcome.

[Mikehd70]

I like the frame idea but i feel i want to look over the edge to see the rest of the plants at the bottom,i would either include them or re pose the shot to exclude them

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Ashish,

I'm having trouble deciding what the subject is - there's far more frame than landscape, plus the frame is sharper and has bolder colours and contrast than the landscape and sky beyond. The frame also has text, which we can't help but read.

If the subject is the sky and landscape, we should see more of it (i.e. crop tighter, or ideally, as Mike mentions, get closer to it) and have it processed to attract and maintain our attention.

HTH, Dave

[Wavelength]

I liked the idea very much; yes, you might have included more of the subject, than the frame. Even now if you crop out more tight, that can make some meaningful difference, i feel
Regards

[ashish]

I get the point that you folks are trying to make but I was in a building which was at a higher altitude than the surrounding landscape. If i had moved in closer, I would have lost the wall that acts as the frame and still would not have got more of the landscape. So I had to stand around 10-15 feet from the wall to get the 'frame' and by doing that there's only so much landscape that can be accommodated. Perhaps, "Frame" would be a more appropriate title.

[Werner]

Strange, but in an interesting way.

[Shadowman]

It looks like a bird observation nook, I think you could lose some of the bottom but the graffiti adds to the image.

[bnnrcn]

I like the idea Ashish, may be you can shoot a better one in different and better shooting conditions

[madcrow]

Might not be the greatest image but I like it.

[mknittle]

+1

[IzzieK]

I like it the way it is, Ashish...very interesting point of view too.

[rpcrowe]

As does Izzie, I like this just the way it is...