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    Fire Tower

    After demolition of the old fire tower, this is the new one. However, we call him the submarine . The tower is made of steel, like a snake, the steel plates are overlaid. This photo was taken with my brand new Canon 80D and Canon 24-70 F4.0. what a wonderful combination.
    The photo was edited in Lightroom.


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    Re: Fire Tower

    The surface is really interesting. I would lift the shadows a bit on the tower . I find the vignette a bit too strong so I would step back a bit. And may be I would crop some of the sky

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    To me the shadows look good. I agree with Binnur on the crop. The one thing that bugs me is the white line on the right side.
    Other wise I really like the image Arnold.

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    Re: Fire Tower

    The vignette is not seen on my computer. It happend when I edited in Ligtroom.

    So this is the crop version and no line.

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    looks better to me Arnold. as an after thought That tower might also lend it's self to a Black and white conversion.
    It has a sort of post apocalyptic feel to it. Kind of mad Max like.

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Very dynamic capture.

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Brilliant image, like the crop.

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Crop works better Arnold

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Arnold, crop is good. I agree with Mark, black and white may be quite stunning.
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Ah, I forgot to say that I agree with the comments about converting to B&W

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Very well done

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Now in B&W.

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    Re: Fire Tower

    Although the color image is nice too, I prefer the B&W Arnold It looks a bit oversharpened though , but you can easily fix it with PP .

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    Re: Fire Tower

    That works for me Arnold. The walkways blend in better.

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