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23rd December 2016, 09:13 AM
#1
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23rd December 2016, 10:44 AM
#2
Re: Sundown
Very nice, it's the buildings, leading lines for me. Could do with a bit of brightening of the foreground. I'd almost suggest cropping out the sun but the reflection gives a good return line.
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23rd December 2016, 07:53 PM
#3
Re: Sundown
The foreground is a bit on the dark side but I fear that any attempt to brighten it would just turn 'muddy' so I would leave it alone.
There is probably another option by cropping square and losing some of the foreground. Not necessarily any better but just a different alternative.
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23rd December 2016, 08:04 PM
#4
Re: Sundown
Regarding the foreground.
I copied this image using the snipping tool. I then, opened it in Photoshop CC.
I placed three control points, using the NIK Viveza Plug-In, on the image: rocks image right, foreground vegetation image right of the fence and the final control point on the lighthouse. I grouped these points and increased the brightness slider and structure slider.
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23rd December 2016, 10:24 PM
#5
Re: Sundown
Nice improvement Richard. I think you need to bring some of the orange/red back in the sunlight reflection on the buildings and above the horizon for my eye because that's what first caught my eye in the original but it's a little lost in the edit.
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23rd December 2016, 11:36 PM
#6
Re: Sundown
Hi, Jeff
Admittedly, I tend to live on the dark of exposure and contrast, but I think I prefer the FG as you have left it- it seems entirely appropriate and natural to the position of the sun, and the amount of ambient light. I rarely disagree, with Richard, but in this circumstance, I think the brighter FG suggests a lighting source other than the very low-lying sun about to set, and that the color temp isn't consistent with the setting sun.
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24th December 2016, 03:57 AM
#7
Re: Sundown
Very nice image
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24th December 2016, 12:15 PM
#8
Re: Sundown
Here is different perspective of the site, a bitter cold winter day
D610 #2 Ft. Williams #2-24-70-Winter HD1bINITIALS by J T, on Flickr
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24th December 2016, 05:56 PM
#9
Re: Sundown
#1 a nice image, #2 a beauty, very well executed.
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24th December 2016, 06:20 PM
#10
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24th December 2016, 06:38 PM
#11
Re: Sundown
Yes, the second image is excellent.
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24th December 2016, 09:52 PM
#12
Re: Sundown
Second one is a real beauty, Jeff. almost HDR-like in the best sense. Not much contrast, but it really works here.
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25th December 2016, 04:04 PM
#13
Re: Sundown
Nice image. I feel that Richard's edit makes the foreground too light. In the original I can see all the detail I'd expect but have to look carefully, as I would when the sun is well down
Last edited by Davejl; 25th December 2016 at 04:11 PM.
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25th December 2016, 04:21 PM
#14
Re: Sundown
I just love the soft, moody look of the second image.
In the first image, it seems that the foreground object is an historic or geologic marker. What does it indicate?
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