At the weekly market - C&C are welcome

[Tejal]

kindly share your critics for my below images.

Regards,

Tejal

IMG_3387 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

IMG_3373 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

Hi Tejal

In the first image there are multiple subjects/elements that work: gentleman on phone and his reflection, slanting land mass, a the young man near middle. I like the fact they are gazing off in the distance, it adds to the story. I feel there is too much red in the composition and this one would perhaps work better as black and white.

Second image works also, too bad the bottom of the bed frame is cropped. This image works in color and might also work in black and white. The first looks like a moment of leisure and the second a day of work.

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal

In the first image there are multiple subjects/elements that work: gentleman on phone and his reflection, slanting land mass, a the young man near middle. I like the fact they are gazing off in the distance, it adds to the story. I feel there is too much red in the composition and this one would perhaps work better as black and white.

Second image works also, too bad the bottom of the bed frame is cropped. This image works in color and might also work in black and white. The first looks like a moment of leisure and the second a day of work.

Thanks John for your detailed feedback. B&W, yes I will try it out. If possible will share also.

[Geoff F]

The subject movement blur spoils the first one for me; however, I think the second image is the more interesting scene anyway.

[Tejal]

The subject movement blur spoils the first one for me; however, I think the second image is the more interesting scene anyway.

thank you for your feedback.

[madcrow]

Two nice images and reflections well captured.

[Tejal]

Two nice images and reflections well captured.

Thank you. 😊

[Jim A]

More connection for me in the second image, Tejal. The reflection and the "prize" (headboard) add, it is more of a story.

[Tejal]

More connection for me in the second image, Tejal. The reflection and the "prize" (headboard) add, it is more of a story.

Thank you for your input.

[RBSinTo]

Tejal,
To me, the most interesting element of these two photos is the bright red clothing of the men.
Otherwise, as story-telling pictures I don't think that either works particularly well.
Except for the title, I had no idea what is going on here.
Perhaps including the stalls of the sellers showing their wares might have helped tell the story. What I can see here is not enough and essentially tells me nothing.
Robert

[Tejal]

Tejal,
To me, the most interesting element of these two photos is the bright red clothing of the men.
Otherwise, as story-telling pictures I don't think that either works particularly well.
Except for the title, I had no idea what is going on here.
Perhaps including the stalls of the sellers showing their wares might have helped tell the story. What I can see here is not enough and essentially tells me nothing.
Robert

Thank you Robert for your feedback. 😊