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    In the Rain

    In the Rain

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    Re: In the Rain

    I think it's a nice start, but my reaction is that it lacks pop, perhaps in part because of the rain. I did a very quick edit, raising the black point, adding contrast with a curve, increasing vibrance and saturation a bit, and adding local contrast. It's not polished, and it may be a bit overdone, but it shows what I mean:

    In the Rain

    In case you are interested in the details, I did this all in photoshop, and it would have been different in Lightroom. A curves layer in Photoshop with normal blend mode or in Lightroom will increase saturation as well contrast. So, to have a little more control, I set the curves layer to luminosity only, which Lightroom won't let you do, and added vibrance and saturation in a separate layer. For local contrast, I used an unsharp mask layer, 20%, 50 pixels, 0 threshold, with 50% opacity. In Lightroom, the closest effect is simpler: just up the clarity slider.
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    Re: In the Rain

    Nice colors and reflections

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    Re: In the Rain

    Thanks both.

    Dan I was thinking this might benefit from a little more pop. Thanks for taking the time.

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    Re: In the Rain

    +1 to what Dan has written and done in his edit.

    Adjusting the black and white points boosts contrast (and tonal range) and is often all that stand between a so-so shot and a really nice shot, as Dan has demonstrated.

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    Re: In the Rain

    I don't see any residual snow, have you not had much?

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    Re: In the Rain

    Nice photo Jim!

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    Re: In the Rain

    Nice shot. With the reflection and rain drops this is one time that keeping a lot of water in the FG and splitting the horizon works well. One problem with rainy shots is the flat lighting and lack of DR. The edited version is much improved IMO.

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    Re: In the Rain

    +1 for Dan's edit.

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    Re: In the Rain

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    +1 to what Dan has written and done in his edit.

    Adjusting the black and white points boosts contrast (and tonal range) and is often all that stand between a so-so shot and a really nice shot, as Dan has demonstrated.

    +1

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