Needs something to make it brighter.
+1 for WM comments.
I'd say the subject is a bit central.
I like the tonal ranges, the sky has a bit too much noise though.
Many thanks to all who replied the C&C was most welcome.
The shot was taken long after the sun had gone down and it was almost dark. It was partly a test of the Olympus 12-100mm lens. 1/200sec ISO500 F4 and hand held. The pair were home after what had probably been a very slow trip against the tide and I wanted to catch some of the mood - it didn't quite work.
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There was never going to be a lot of detail.
This was the sunset about ten minutes earlier.
It didn't find its way to the 'keepers' folder either.