Originally Posted by
Shadowman
Hi Judith,
Unfortunately you provided too much detail on the location, conditions of the day to make the photograph more intriguing. Of course you could have done the same with a title, such as "Waiting for a Train on a Dreary Day" and we would have been satisfied with any inquiry we might have had, however you could have misled us with your title or inferred a particular situation based on your own bias but I doubt that you would. And this is what limits this particular composition for me, mystery solved perhaps, I know where the woman is, what she is doing, and the only question left is where is she going; but that information (where she is going) isn't that important. If it were me I would limit providing details of environment, let the viewer become engaged with the image and search for details within.