Originally Posted by
ccphoto
A bit of a nick but I have two things that I wish were different. The first is the lack of foreground. Even another 1/2 inch or so would allow the eye an easier entry into the scene. The second is that since everything else is nice and sharp, I'd like to see the lipstick heavier or at least more defined...I don't mean glompy, just higher definition as if the lady wanted to leave an impression.
Overall, I like the composition, use of subdued lighting and the shadows don't really bother me at all. Like you said, "more toward the noir," to me a scene right out of Dashiell Hammett's, Maltese Falcon.