Originally Posted by
John 2
This is a very nice study and it deserves some comment Ashish. I've looked at it several times and her features are not only very engaging but the contrasty light suits them well (IMHO). I am a little bothered however, by the brighter areas of the rest of the image, that is her neck rings and the top of her hat. I'm sure that you have captured them as they undoubtedly were but they distract a little from the face and my instinct would be to pull them back a bit for the sake of giving that part of her a bit more prominence. I don't think that in doing so you will lose the significance of the neck rings, which clearly are an important part of the story. Nice work either way.
P.S. had a play to try to demonstrate what I mean.