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    Great Tit - Illustrative.

    The garden birds are getting busy. The PP for this resulted from the fact that it wasn't crisp enough for a pure natural history shot and because I'm still looking for something slightly different to hang on the wall. Comments welcome.

    Fuji X plus 100-400 lens and some PP using Topaz plugins.
    Great Tit - Illustrative.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    I like the treatment! Nicely done!

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    I do like what you have produced. Nice one.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    Nice effect. If that green bokeh had been anywhere else, it would have been distracting.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    Looks like an oil painting..... excellent

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    Nice treatment John

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    Nicely done.

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    John, sound reason for it but not something I would do myself. Having said that it looks good, I would consider putting the twig back to 'normal' so its a blend of the two ?

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    Very nice and subtle. I could see that on a wall. I like Mark's idea about the twig, I think that it would draw you in even closer.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    I do not like the green area at the bottom of the bird. Is that kind of like a reflection? Overall it is a nice sharp shot and good processing, minus the green area.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    Thanks all for the feedback.

    John, Mark, Susan and Izzie. Got to agree about the twig. Pink is not the best colour for it and I have altered the colour balance. As for the green patch, I did originally eliminate it but somehow it seemed necessary to fill the negative space bottom right and so in the end I left it. Both corrections have been applied to the image below. I'm not sure now . What do you think.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    Well, at least the vignette smooths out the colours. Much better looking.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    The bird stands out more this way

    Quote Originally Posted by John 2 View Post
    Thanks all for the feedback.

    John, Mark, Susan and Izzie. Got to agree about the twig. Pink is not the best colour for it and I have altered the colour balance. As for the green patch, I did originally eliminate it but somehow it seemed necessary to fill the negative space bottom right and so in the end I left it. Both corrections have been applied to the image below. I'm not sure now . What do you think.

    Great Tit - Illustrative.

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    Re: Great Tit - Illustrative.

    Thanks Izzie, thanks Binnur.

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