Looks good but I think there is another scene to be had here by losing some of the sky and cropping to something like 16 x 9 ratio which gives a really wide panoramic effect.
So beautiful.... loved this
Really nice image, I'd go with more sky!
That is what I was thinking about. The crop gives a much wider appearance and those wheel marks really guide our vision to the distant horizon now
+1 to Geoff's comments.
Both versions work well for me Trevor. I was wondering if it would help to bring the shadow out very very slightly on the house.
Tried Grahame; the problem is the granary is made from aspen wood. It weathers to black in shaded areas and unfortunately this side is facing east so it gets only a bit of sun. Bringing up the shadow, warmth and brightness leaves it a weird, flat, plastic grey. Gave up as I was never content with the result.
Good idea though!
Very nice Trevor, I prefer the original
I agree with Matt and Binnur. the original is slightly better to me.
Trevor, I prefer the second version. Would the first version work in B&W?
Cheers Ole
I processed both versions in black and white. I could not transfer to Nik Siver Effex, so these are the best I can do in Capture One. The first version may be be the same crop as I had to recrop the versions. Hopefully close for comparison purposes
Good idea, when I have some free time I will revisit this to see if I can improve on it.
IMO the color images are more powerful Trevor
But moving my screen edge to give a more extreme panoramic effect by removing most of the sky above that band of cloud the B&W version suddenly gets far more dramatic and does work for me.