Rightly so, Brian. My first thought was that the shot is too tight, but there is some nice sharp detail to be explored there.
I suspect that you would have had a better shot without all of the photographic "amputations" of legs and antennae.
Rich colors (except for the glare)!
In my mind, when faced with that situation the solution is to close in on the bug using a composition that works. This composition doesn't work for me because of the "cut off" appendages. Another way of putting it is that you didn't close in enough. Consider cropping on the right to eliminate about one-third of the image. Even though that improves the image for me, beginning with a composition that would have been stronger would have been the ideal way to go.
I wonder if you're confusing detail with magnification. All of the detail in your first version is present in your second version.
Nice capture of the colors.
Sadly closer was not an option because of where the cricket was. Cropping 1/3 off the right would have destroyed the flow of the wing which I wanted to keep. You're right the ideal is a perfectly composed shot as the shutter is clicked but that's rarely possible in the bug world.
I've never seen a cricket that close up - neat. You brought out the colors really well in PP.
I don't know the lens at all, but what I do know is that cropping a bit out of the image is far easier than trying to rebuild content that was not photographed. If you were able to photograph this close, backing off a bit would definitely be within the lens's ability to focus.
The lens will focus at infinity and give you a nice landscape. That's not the question. The question is how much will you see. If I can get within 10 inches I can with a little luck get a good compound eye shot. Fifteen inches away try as I may I'm not going to see the compound eyes. If I had included all of the cricket I would not have gotten enough magnification to see the detail the lens had captured.