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4th May 2017, 07:49 PM
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Flossie's
Trying to be more documentary than landscape, but still within the confines of trying to convey the sense and feeling of a place.
This is part of my series of images from my visit to Assynt in the north-west corner of Scotland.
Marianne, who owns Flossie's is a wonderful person.
As always, you critique of my work is welcomed.
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4th May 2017, 08:14 PM
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Re: Flossie's
The dogs make the photo. Well done for including them!
Consider adding more contrast to the sign leaning up against the wall and the two signs in the windows to make their text stand out more.
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4th May 2017, 10:22 PM
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Re: Flossie's
For me it's the signs as well as the structure. Nicely captured.
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5th May 2017, 12:40 AM
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Re: Flossie's
I like the way you have opened up the interior with the dogs. That definitely works well in this image, but that being said, I don't like shots with open doors that are little more than a "black hole".
On the other hand, I do find your crop to be rather (uncomfortably(?)) tight on this one. I can only assume that the view on either side of the shop was uninteresting / unattractive?
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