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    Falcon at Wingspan

    I took this photo at least a year ago, but have been reviewing and suddenly thought what would he/she look like close up? Here is the result. Any suggestions gratefully received as this is not one of my areas of getting good images.

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    Looks reasonably sharp.

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    If I was to process this shot as one of my bug shots;
    1) tone down the blown highlights on the beak
    2) clone out the middle bright area in the eye
    3) remove some of the bg noise
    4) put a little more clarity/structure into the feathers.
    5) I would also see how the shot looked with the bird facing to the left.

    Just some thoughts. It's a good shot as it is. Hope you don't mind but I was curious. Let me stress that my rendering is certainly different but not necessarily better. It is just one of many ways to develop your excellent shot.

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    Last edited by JBW; 10th May 2017 at 04:18 AM.

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    Its look at the viewer is very sharp which masks the lesser sharpness of the image liked it

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    Beautiful bird. Nicely caught. The flipped orientation Brian suggests is much stronger IMHO. If it were mine I would work on the bg noise too.

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    It is clear and sharp enough. +1 to Brian's edit too.

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    Very good suggestions, Brian, thanks, much appreciated! Thanks to others too for your feedback.

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    Look'n great , love the details and the eye .

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    Re: Falcon at Wingspan

    Very nice. Brian's edit improved the image

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