Looks like contrasty lighting isn't helping Brian,
I find it is so easy to 'blow' the specular highlights on the top of those eyes.
It was probably beyond the possible, but ideally, a sidestep left to get the rest of the head in front of the pale background would have been nice.
Really nice red body, well done, Dave
A plain old black rain (non photo) umbrella (which I know are available locally in the P.I.) could help you by shading the creature from the bright sun...
If you clean up that bit of spottiness near the bottom, I think you will have a good image with this monochrome version, Brian. It really brings out the shapes and wing vein details.
Nicely captured.