Results 1 to 12 of 12

Thread: A black and white shot...

  1. #1
    AlwaysOnAuto's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2014
    Location
    Orange County CA USA
    Posts
    1,535

    A black and white shot...

    Open for comments on it.

    A black and white shot...

  2. #2

    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    northern Virginia suburb of Washington, DC
    Posts
    19,064

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Very nice quality of light and shades of grey. Consider cropping on the left to eliminate all but the two blossoms on the right.

  3. #3
    bje07's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2013
    Location
    Lorient France
    Posts
    2,382
    Real Name
    Jean

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    Very nice quality of light and shades of grey. Consider cropping on the left to eliminate all but the two blossoms on the right.

    +1
    very fine details of the flower petals

  4. #4
    DanK's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Location
    New England
    Posts
    8,836
    Real Name
    Dan

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Nice! Very subtle tones. I agree with Mike that the stuff on the left is distracting, but rather than crop it out, which might make the composition tight, you could select it and remove it. I did that and turned the rest of the background pure black:

    A black and white shot...

  5. #5
    Shadowman's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    WNY
    Posts
    36,716
    Real Name
    John

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Nicely done.

  6. #6

    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    northern Virginia suburb of Washington, DC
    Posts
    19,064

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Yes, Dan's idea is better than mine. It requires more effort but the results are worth it.

  7. #7
    Cogito's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Location
    Fenland
    Posts
    343
    Real Name
    Tony

    Re: A black and white shot...

    An alternative which you may not like


    A black and white shot...

  8. #8
    DanK's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Location
    New England
    Posts
    8,836
    Real Name
    Dan

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    Yes, Dan's idea is better than mine. It requires more effort but the results are worth it.
    More, perhaps, but still very little effort. One the first pass, I used photoshop's quick select tool to select the stuff I wanted to delete. It selected it perfectly, with no need for adjustment. I selected the levels adjustment, and photoshop automatically added my selection to it as a mask. I blacked that out. Then I did the same with the background. Again, the quick select tool made no mistakes. I would guess the total time was less than 2 minutes.

    Something like this starts to require time and effort when it is hard to make a correct selection, but in this case, it was trivially easy because photoshop's quick select tool has become so polished.

  9. #9
    Wavelength's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2012
    Location
    Kerala, India
    Posts
    13,862
    Real Name
    Nandakumar

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Excellent work; Dan's modification does really work; Cogito's work brings some enigma to the image and works on another level

  10. #10
    AlwaysOnAuto's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2014
    Location
    Orange County CA USA
    Posts
    1,535

    Re: A black and white shot...

    Thanks for the comments gents.
    My software isn't that sophisticated so most of those crops/changes wouldn't be possible for me to make.

  11. #11

    Join Date
    Oct 2013
    Location
    Philippines
    Posts
    12,181
    Real Name
    Brian

    Re: A black and white shot...

    not sure about the crop but I love the B&W treatment.

  12. #12
    IzzieK's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Chesterfield, Missouri/Melbourne, Australia
    Posts
    17,827
    Real Name
    Izzie

    Re: A black and white shot...

    I would have suggested the same as Dan's but Alan already once said before that his software is not good enough to do many things.

Tags for this Thread

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •