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    Summer Berries

    Wasn't the berries that caught my eye it was the background. Does it work?

    Summer Berries

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    Re: Summer Berries

    A very unusual and interesting background that very nicely complements the subject. It might help you to know that I immediately reacted that way to your image before I read your question about whether the background works.

    Consider lifting the tones of the stems so they don't appear as a silhouette, though doing so might create unwanted noise.

    Also consider adding a very slight (barely noticeable) vignette that concentrates the viewer's eye on the subject and adds a bit more depth to the image.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Beautiful; is this mulberry ?

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    Re: Summer Berries

    I would consider cropping differently to lose some of the out of focus stems from the left side? Otherwise, this looks OK.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Quote Originally Posted by Ziggy View Post
    Wasn't the berries that caught my eye it was the background. Does it work?
    Yes it does. The bristles/spines on the stems and bracts help enhance the composition.

    I would say this was a species of Rubus, which includes the Brambles, Blackberries, Raspberries etc.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Lovely photo

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Nicely done.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Jim, not my favourite background .
    Mike suggests "lifting the tones of the stems" but they appear to be black to me and therefore tricky to lift!
    But Mike's suggestion for some vignette seems sound, although I'd suggest a lot of vignette.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    An absolutely lovely image.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Thanks all for taking the time to comment, appreciated.

    Mike and Tony thanks for advice on how to improved the image. Will play around with your suggestions.

    Nandakumar, I these these are blackberries.

    FYI: This was taken in a group of pine trees so the background are pine needles laying on the ground.
    Last edited by Ziggy; 14th July 2017 at 06:43 PM.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    It works for me, Ziggy...

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    It works for me, Ziggy...
    Thanks Izzie.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Hi Ziggy, love it and wouldnt change anything

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    Re: Summer Berries

    I like it. Just a little vignette though. That is only my opinion.
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Nice picture, for me the black parts must be lightened, BG is OK for me.

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    Re: Summer Berries

    Very nice! Lovely colours and clarity. Beautiful!

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    Re: Summer Berries

    They are called wine berries.

    Nice picture.

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