Brian, I like it well enough as is. How about cropping a bit off the left side and perhaps lighten the flowers a tad.
Cheers Ole
A crop coming in from the left to the start of the dry yellow leaf creates a nice shot as well. However i so rarely play on the dark side anymore that I don't want to lighten the flowrrs.
Nevertheless I took lots of shots and I'll incorporate your suggestions into one of the brighter ones just to see how it comes out!
Nice effort.
I liked it very much; i have never seen two colored lilies like this
That brown leaf is a bit of distraction to the composition
Here, locally its pure white version, is called locally...it has a much spreading fragrance.....