Punished

[kaskais]

(beach essays)

“I’m always mentally photographing everything as practice.” – Minor White



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[Shadowman]

Great title, thought provoking aspect as to how it fits within the composition; is it the environment, the third party, or the numerous footprints of an unseen extra?

[Wandjina]

Fernando, I have to admit that I don't understand the title of your photo. However, I feel there is too much negative space. I would do some serious cropping if it was my photo. I would crop out the lower half so that the bottom of the adjusted photo is just below the curved line of footprints in front of the two seated men. I would change the aspect ratio to landscape and crop so that the horizon lies on the lower horizon third point line and the two men lie on the left hand vertical third point. I would then clone out the figure emerging over the sand hill on the very left.
I think this makes it a better photo, but I may have destroyed the message that you were trying to convey. In which case, I apologise and please ignore my comments.