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16th October 2017, 01:18 PM
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16th October 2017, 02:46 PM
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16th October 2017, 07:14 PM
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Re: Green eyes
Yes, looks good to me as well; a nice pose.
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16th October 2017, 10:13 PM
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16th October 2017, 11:32 PM
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Re: Green eyes
Nicely done Javier. I'm going to be very picky in my commentary. This is not to take away from a nice image, but things to think about when you photograph and process quality images.
1. I am not a great fan of partially covered eyes. These are the key element of any portrait, so keeping them clear and visible is usually the best approach.
2. Keeping the hair off the neck, especially on the side closest to the camera usually produces superior results. The face and neck are key components of a portrait like this, so use these features , rather than interrupting / hiding them with hair.
3. There are a couple of strange little shadows. One under your model's nose and one under her lower lip. Burning those in will result in a more attractive image.
4. Reducing some of the hot spots on the nose and forehead would help this image too.
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