What a scar on the landscape.
Good one, Graham. There's almost an abstract quality in it given the colours of the rock and the roadways and shelves cutting across it.
Thanks Donald.
It is not quite the scar, that abstracting it from the landscape makes it. Point of view is not quite everything, but I would have liked the viewing platform to have been a little to the right with some slots in the cyclone wire fence to allow a little more room on the right.
I have been influenced by Edward Burtynsky's work on the troubled relationship we have with mining. I don't know if you know his work on Minescapes from Western Australia?
I would take out the sky completely Graham as it adds nothing to the composition. Interesting image!
+1 to Jim's comment. It would be a stronger image without the sky. It is nothing more than a distracting element that does not add to the image. I understand your comment, but I don't feel the sky is doing what you want it to.
Yes, the image definitely has that Burtynsky "manufactured landscape" look to it.
I liked it as such... i prefer to include sky for a feeling, "from here to eternity..."